I chose to read that chapter “As He Puts It” form “They Say I say” which is about how to launch an effective argument that you need to write the arguments of others into your own text. I chose this chapter because I think that I have a hard time sometimes of using someone else’s work to help my argument. I feel like I could find better quotes that help support my argument. I think that by reading this chapter that it was helpful and gave me some new ideas of how to find quotes that really help support my claim and arguments.
For my revisions I changed up my thesis statement.
Old thesis: Art and science should not be pegged against each other but rather be encouraged to come together.
New thesis:
Sports management is a up and coming field, as someone studying in this field my goal is to be a general manager of a professional sports team. The integration Arts and sciences will be very beneficial to the field and the possibilities endless.
